It was a very cute little story to begin with. I admit I got a bit of fright and one point. But the ending credits made it cute.
Overall the animation was farely simple but well pieced together with the use of the shady kind of anime with the well done voice acting. The scenery was also very well animated and I'm glad you took your time with this. I quite liked your bus too, that is probably one of the best buses I have ever seen animated. The voice acting was superb and the written story was also just as good.
Overall it's a fantastic little flash you did and I hope to see more from you.
Voice Acting 8/10