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Rocksbury

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A little story

Posted by Rocksbury - November 12th, 2008


Chapter 1

Jason was afraid as was his sister. They were both in the city of Kansas but already 1/6 of it's people were dead. A new disease has broken out and it can kill in less than five minutes. They saw helicopters coming in dropping off troops. "Why's the army coming here to drop troops off, not rescue us?" Jason said with a quiver in his voice.

His sister shook her head "Does not matter let's just get to somewhere safe, I heard after the disease get's you once you die you come back as a beserked beast." A cold chill ran down her spine, "But it was just some people chatting about it." They continued on through the never ending street lights flickering and people baraccaded behind their houses. A dead body was lieing in the middle of the street, blood was sprayed all over the road. "Don't look Jason" His sister whispered. She herself nearly vomited at the site of this body muscle and veins were strewn all over. Half of the bodies right arm was missing and chunk of the waist was taken out too. "The sooner we get to mom the better."

They kept on walking almost running but, the body it looked... to familiar to think of who it could be. "It can't be" Jason told himself. Gunfire sounds began to echo into the street. Jason and his sister both began to sprint not caring of what was happening. Their parents house was finally inside the began knocking frantically. The door open and they both lunged inside. Jason gave a huge sigh of relief. "Where's dad" His sister asked. Their mother made a sorrow look on her face. Jason had realised what happened.


Comments

it's good, though the punctuation could do with a little work.

So,how's things out your way?
the storms didn't get us very badly in my suburb at ipswich.

Yeah GC got more lightning than the gap the gap basically got a cyclone. My friends house got hit by lightning poor fella

Australia was trite, contrived, and melodramatic. And don't even get me started on the complete lack of chemistry between Hugh Jackman and Nicole Kidman as the romantic leads. Baz Luhrmann's worst effort by far.

Let me see a movie be made about wherever the hell you come from jackass